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    Inactive Member Fliptastic29's Avatar
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    Beautiful Blue Sky,
    Green vibrant leaves,
    and sweet beats,
    flowing out of the cd player set me in this mood of tranquility and inner peace,
    the wind wispers secrets,
    old and new,
    And the clouds form together to bring about shapes that give me a better perspective on life.
    An eagle screaches,
    which inturn brings me back to reality,
    and i stare at this computer and realize i have to go back to work,
    sniffle sniffle,
    boo hoo,
    o well it's all good.

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    I dont like that last line!
    Take it off, and it's nice.
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    That last line just doesn't fit for me.
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    I think we can all relate to those days Flipster... definately.
    Nice work.

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